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Please feel free to comment on the story itself (even though there's not much to read, yet), and also grammar, spelling and similar problems everyone's inevitably running into. Though they're sometimes hard to avoid, I'll try my best to correct them.

I'm hoping to build on this and add a little bit more to the story whenever I have some spare time at my hands and have an idea. It's obviously not more than a little prequel for greater things (hopefully) to come. :-)

Nice Morar. I enjoyed reading it, nothing glaring jumped out to me. It's also nice to see glimpses into what's going on behind the pod as it where.

CJ