2009-06-14, 18:08
Just a little thing i threw together about my character. Next Chapters will come soon.
2009-06-14, 19:03
2009-06-15, 00:12
One suggestion I have is to keep it in 3rd person or 1st. You sort of go back and forth there, using quotes, then 'me'. I'd suggest changing the 'me' to him. Also, in your title, Chronicles is spelled wrong.
Other than that, it's entertaining.
Other than that, it's entertaining
.2009-06-21, 17:11